I just wrote a post in Russian for the first time in my life.

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Few days ago, I posted a question here, about what is the best way to learn to write in Russian, mainly, people just told me to start... so I did, and this is: 
http://leakingbucket.livejournal.com/2113.html
the result!!!
which I have spent on 30 mins, I want you to know that this is my first time writing what so ever in Russian (though I do know it fluently, and can read quite good as I said in my last post.)
I would be really glad if you people tell me what you think about my writing for the first time, correct me, and just comment on the topic.


Thank you all in advance ^_^

I fixed whatever I could...

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Well, the people that saw my previous post commented about my mistakes, so as a good student I am trying to be, I fixed them all:

http://leakingbucket.livejournal.com/2113.html

If there are still some mistakes, please tell me and correct if you have the time, thank you in advance. ^_^

p.s


I also rewrote all the posts that were written in translit, so I would be really happy, if you read them (its 3 short posts), and point out my mistakes. : )