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[bellezzarubata.livejournal.com]

I was hoping someone would be able to guide me in corrections to this email I'd like to send. Normally, I'd ask my grandparents but I'd like to try here first. Also, if this sounds polite instead of pushy. I've been hearing that aside from Вы, Americans tend to be much more formal. Anyway.

( Thank you!! )