Someone who can correct my mistakes, please!

[angelicagallo.livejournal.com]

Hi, I'm Angelica, I'm Italian, I study English and Russian and it's my first experience on Live Journal! I need to improve my Russian writing skills  so I would like someone to see and correct my posts. Is there anyone who could give a look to my entries in my journal? Thank you in advance ;)  

Comments

[dil.livejournal.com]

"поощрение" is mostly "reward", or "promotion".

In this case I'd say "за понимание" (for understanding), "за поддержку" (for supporting), or just "за положительную оценку"(for appreciation).

[angelicagallo.livejournal.com]

"за поддержку" I meant... Thank you!