I fixed whatever I could...

[leakingbucket.livejournal.com]

Well, the people that saw my previous post commented about my mistakes, so as a good student I am trying to be, I fixed them all:

http://leakingbucket.livejournal.com/2113.html

If there are still some mistakes, please tell me and correct if you have the time, thank you in advance. ^_^

p.s


I also rewrote all the posts that were written in translit, so I would be really happy, if you read them (its 3 short posts), and point out my mistakes. : )

Comments

[oryx_and_crake]

You should put the comma after "счастлива", otherwise the meaning is different:
"счастлива только тогда, когда" means you are happy only when a certain fact occurs, and "ты понимаешь, что счастлива, только тогда, когда..." means that you realize this only when this occurs.

Besides, you can remove some unnecessary words from this sentence and make the structure more simple and straightforward:
Ты понимаешь, что по-настоящему счастлива, когда у тебя ужасное настроение, и человек который тебя любит, посылает вот такую смску:

[oryx_and_crake]

and yes, you need a comma before который