notes to a landlady

[captainfisto.livejournal.com]

My current landlady is Russian and I am moving out next month. I want to leave her a note saying that something along the lines of "thank you, but it is time for me to go." How does this sound to a native Russian speaker? Is it too much? Is it awkward? Is переводить the right verb?

Благодарю вас за время, в вашем прекрасном доме, но теперь моя пора переводить.

Thanks for your help.

Comments

[quizzical-view.livejournal.com]

Мне пора уезжать. Благодарю за время, проведённое в вашем прекрасном доме.

That's not awkward. Just polite.

[josie-dioro.livejournal.com]

In your sentences you intensify the fact of moving, but in the auther's variant she strentherns the gratitude, IMHO