learn_russian | Nov. 9th, 2009

Hello! I am a student of Russian here in Canada. I have been studying in university for a couple years. I was asked to write a piece modeling high academic prose using participles, complicated syntax and embeded clauses and cases. The thing is... I have such a limited vocabulary, so to write in high academic style was quite a challenge.

I have the mechanics down; Yeah my sentences have a couple participles and the syntax is definitely complicated however without the necessary semantic knowledge, I have no idea if any of this makes sense.

Please help me out and feel free to make comments on the content or corrections where you wish. If it is too terrible to correct then don't worry about it, but if there is anyone out there who has some extra time on their hands (and enjoys correcting things) go for it! I'm not the greatest at English grammar but I can try to help some one else out too if they want. I just want to try to get a grasp on some of these concepts.

Thanks a billion!!
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Это произведение искуства была создана в восемнадцатом веке. В настоящее время отображается на русский музей.

Мне кажется, что это полотно возникло периода романтизма, на основе использование драмы и эмоции вывавший.

Это произведение хорошо составное. Содержание как на самом деле и очень подробное, однако противоречатся использованию несвойственних цвет. Заменивщий природные цветы яркостью, на пример жёлтой, красной и чёртой цвет, создалось чуство, что связано с периодом романтизма.

Глубина успешно созданась с помощью линейной перспективой и воздушной перспективой.

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What I want to say:

This piece of art was produced in the 18^th century. Currently it is on display at the Russian museum.

My guess is that this painting came from the romanticism era, based on the use of (intense) drama and the emotions that are evoked.

This piece has great composition. The content is realistic and very detailed; however it is contradicted by the use of unnatural colors. Having the natural colors be replaced with high intensity colors, like red black and yellow, a sense is created that is associated with the romanticism period.

Depth was successfully created with the help of linear and aerial perspective.