editing help

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I posted an essay about the "Mysterious Russian Soul" a few months ago. My humble little essay was accepted for publication in a minor collection of essays in the Russian language at my university. I am supposed to edit it and submit it for final publication sometime soon, so I was hoping you could look it over and inform me of any mistakes. Thanks very much in advance. Read below( Read more... )