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[olydiagron.livejournal.com]

Hi!
I understand that the story I put as a comment to this post is ful of mistakes... But what I am really intressted in is my use of the aspects. Would anybody like correct and comment?
Thanks!!!!
Amanda

Update: Thank you! I've tried to correct it and posted the whole story once again as a comment. But I'm a perfectionist, so i need my internet proffessors to go over it just once more... thanks!

Comments

[olydiagron.livejournal.com]

Thanks!!!

I'm really bad at commas and dashes, I never know wich I should use. In swedish we put them were we make pauses, basically, it is not strictly gramatical as in russian.

[laew.livejournal.com]

Yap, Russian "punctuation" rules are very strict and sometimes hard. Especially, "direct speech" rules. And we often mistake with that.