Translation Help

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I apologize ahead of time, I'm really new to learning Russian myself, so my Russian is quite rusty.

I'm trying to subtitle a Russian Film and have come to a problem. I'm trying to translate a song and it's coming up more like English Jiberish then anything. I've included the MP3 and my translation. Is anyone kind enough to help me out where I've gone wrong?

I truly appreciate everyone's help!
Warmest,
Laura ^_^

[MP3]

My Translation:

Beginning to sing the dream, the blossoming blossom,
The disappearing day, light going out.
Opening a window, I saw a lilac bush.
It was in the spring in departing day.

Flowers breathed out – and shadows of exulting copes have moved on dark eaves.
The melancholy choked, the soul was engaged,
I threw open the window, trembling and shivering.