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hello,

I'm having trouble saying the following in Russian:

... the plot is not strong enough to withstand conceptual staging and the opera crumbles under the heavy hand of the director

any help would be appreciated,

t.

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[ashalynd.livejournal.com]

Сюжет слабоват для концептуальной постановки, и опера просто разваливается под тяжелой рукой режиссера.

It tries to convey the idea but sounds a bit clumsy.

[serialcondition.livejournal.com]

>It tries to convey the idea but sounds a bit clumsy.

thank you

it's a good start -- I had no idea how to even begin

t.