Please help?

[eisenheim.livejournal.com]

Hi! I am hoping someone will be kind enough to help me. I have to write a "news report"  and read if in class and I wrote a short one about a  fencing tournament. My Russian is horrible so I was wondering if someone could give it a quick read through and let me know where my errors are(And I know there must be a lot because I am not familiar with the style of news and I know only simple grammar.) Also, if anyone has any tips on how to make this more "broadcast news" like, that would be great. Thanks!

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